Kristineaz
Is this your blog? I'm an Editor so the very first thing I always spot are typos & spelling errors. And you have, "As noted in the Wikipedia exert," and I'm guessing you mean "excerpt". So, I'd change that, if that more accurately reflects your intent. :)
Eric
Yeah the quality of whats on there is really awful right now. I needed something to flesh out the site while I grabble the task of making it mine. I will improve with time :)
Kristineaz
I like the clean design of it. It's straight forward and not all cluttered with inconsequential things. Looks good! :)